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The little things they said,
Are what matters the most.
Hello! Goodbye! Can I help you?
Providing aid to some lonely ghost.
Are all forgotten in the blink of an eye.

I'll walk into a room and say good morning!
Noone looks up, but a few albeit they were yawning.  
I'll stand in line, waiting on my turn.
A gentleman cuts in front, looking quite stern.
A passerby bumps into me and spills coffee on my shoe.
Not a word of apology, even as I smile "Hey, howdy do?"

I'll stand on the sidewalk next to a puddle so clear.
A driver will pass, splashing me while the street kids cheer.
I'll leave my phone unattended next to my lunch.
The phone's still there when I get back.
Of course, what would they do,
Make a call while they munch?

I'll ask a question, different from the norm.
Harsh glares would be returned that say,
Why don't you just conform?
They'll dwell on the part that made them mad.
Just a second it would take, to make us all glad.

This is the world we live in.
Unsightly yet true.
We don't speak about it, a bad review.
Manners and etiquette they taught us in schools,
Yet all of this on a syllabus which has yet to be proved.


Kirsten Z. Jacob
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Just a few words about the world we live in..

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This piece cannot in whole or in part be reproduced or altered in any way without my permission.
Copyright © Kirsten Z. Jacob, 2012
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~TegzyPuff97 May 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this reminds me of a dr. seuss type thing except more mature
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~KirtZJ May 31, 2012   Writer
Well Dr. Seuss is a genius. I cant compare to him..But I think I see what you mean.
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~TegzyPuff97 Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
like, telling a story with rhyme and verse...
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I really like your style of writing! :)
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Mood: Joy ~KirtZJ May 25, 2012   Writer
Why thank you! again!
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*KelaLewis-Morin May 15, 2012  Student Writer
Love it :) and it is so true good job nice use of every day life settings it really adds to the piece. these situations everyone can relate to making it universal well done :)
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Mood: Joy ~KirtZJ May 23, 2012   Writer
Thank you so much for the kinds words friend. I wanted to add more settings, but decided against it since it would have gotten a bit lengthy. thanks again!
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*Jujutsu May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
WIN!

Pure truth!
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Mood: Relief ~KirtZJ May 23, 2012   Writer
I know right!
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